Hi Jymin, you have done really well with your plot [[#|summary]]. However I am [[#|again]] disappointed that you are not following my feedback, please see me if you don't understand what I mean, so we can work together to help you be successful in this [[#|task]].
Hi Jymin it was good to see you get your reading log up on the wiki, and I liked how you discussed the best part of the book. However I feel you didn't really focus on the success criteria for this reading log. Where are your making connections? Text to text, text to self and text to the world? This is really disappointing as it was discussed in depth during our lessons. I would like you to have another go at this reading log and add this in and please work on your presentation and keep things simple and in a logical order, look at other reading logs to get ideas.
Hi Jymin, you have done really well with your plot [[#|summary]]. However I am [[#|again]] disappointed that you are not following my feedback, please see me if you don't understand what I mean, so we can work together to help you be successful in this [[#|task]].Hi Jymin it was good to see you get your reading log up on the wiki, and I liked how you discussed the best part of the book. However I feel you didn't really focus on the success criteria for this reading log. Where are your making connections? Text to text, text to self and text to the world? This is really disappointing as it was discussed in depth during our lessons. I would like you to have another go at this reading log and add this in and please work on your presentation and keep things simple and in a logical order, look at other reading logs to get ideas.
i most [[#|liked]] the conference because my [[#|mum]] liked to learn what i was doing at school